All Comments on 'Yes, Mr. T----'

This has been done before (what in the world hasn't), so to be a really good story it needs something else. One thing might be a longer sex scene with more description of what was going on in their heads during the sex, stuff that would put the reader in the moment. Alternately there might have been some conflict between them, a bit of dom/sub or what not.

Boring!!!!!! Been done to death