All Comments on 'Yes, Sir.'

Reading the story was delightful. Certainly makes you want to place yourself at her opening and wait for her begging to reach a crescendo!

Very good story with a great deal of slow sensous build up, yhen the final release. i look forward to reading more about this slave and her Master.

I envy her position. Delicious read. Thank you.

The first thing that came to mind was "this is over the top" in the best possible sense (my thoughts aren't that eloquent), meaning that it surpassed my expectations. This was longer than a lot of typical two page entries and it had the substance to fill it out. The dialogue between the characters was very sexy, my favourite being "Straddle me - and no humping like a little bitch anymore, do you understand?" and I just loved it. This was a really great read, hands down the best first-timer I've ever come across.

get through the first sentence. :(

Having been into the BDSM scene for a lot of years, there's nothing more annoying than the capitalization of a dominates being and none for the submissive. Shows a lack of respect for the submissive in a whole, so...sadly I couldn't read your story. :(