by holden_2005
As my best friend, and most intoxicating lover, often says - "always leave them wanting more"... very well done.
Not really. I like a man that teases, that brings to mind a certain scenario and then builds upon it, like an artist. One more brush stroke here, a little emphasis there, and a beautiful picture is beginning to emerge.
Now, get out those brushes again, and paint ME into your next scene!
~Tori
hot one with good plot in
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You stopped too soon and left your readers wanting more and it's been several years since you wrote this
Hey, what an arousing story - come to me, babe, I will make your fantasy come true - but only if you write more. How about some more from her point of view? How about actually getting down to pleasuring her?
Miranda