All Comments on 'You Can Run but You Can't Hide'

A good premise. He may have had control over her in the past, but by the end it's obvious who was in control. Even with David gone there is so much potential for a series here. Mark is a potential antagonist. The family might think of her as a saviour now but if the truth came out in bits there could be some good friction. There are the mysterious old bosses and there is potential in exploring the sisters. Thanks for the read!

Many thanks for the feedback and ideas. Its very motivating to get comments good or bad and would love more. Johnny no promises but I will try and come back to this as soon as I can and see if I can work out a sequel. It may take a while.

Great story. When stories are all the same it's fun to read one with interest!

What a Great Twist!!!!

For the read.

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I love the twist at the end, really well written!