by FinalStand
A really interesting story line with some well written characters. I am sure the mother is hidden in the house somewhere and I was worried that the flue was going to be blocked with her body, but that didn't happen. Carmen is a badly damaged young woman and I wonder where you are going with the story. Lindsey and Ashe both are hot for him and Carmen is obsessed with Robert, not a healthy situation, although Ashe is better about not expressing her feelings. Can't wait for the next chapter.
now if relation ships can be modified to endure, TK U MLJ LV NV
She certainly has no basis to feel secure. How in the world can all this be wrapped up in the next chapter unless she kills the three of them.