by anixter400
what a wonderful story! I can't wait to see where you go from here with it. i think your transitions between perspective worked pretty well. good luck and have fun!
More Please loving what you have writen so far! can't wait for more
so far this story is good i hope u put more up soon
Lovely story.
still waiting to find out whats going on with this.?
Oh whoop, baby got his foot cut.. geez.