All Comments on 'You Serious?'

Really enjoyed reading this. Very well written.

Thanks for sharing

I am generally not into group sex, but this was very nice!

Cody is one lucky guy. Enjoyed this story. Keep up the great work! 5 stars. Frankie

I always wanted this to happen when I was married, just this way. Even though it never did, it was a great fantasy and stoked many Orgasms for both of us. Thanks for writing it so well. 5 stars plus!

reminds me of my first MFF trio and made me so wet I want to do another MFF

soon - fuck this blasted lockdown

It was a nice comfortable ride to read. Nothing too crazy, very possible story. I am an old fart, enjoy remembering my younger crazier times. Had an older student while in college, always uptight. Got 2 beers in her and real Dolly came out. Before we graduated and she went back home I called her 2 Beers for a nickname.. Once we broke the ice discretely and in private it was anything goes.

Great story. Can't wait for a follow-up.

Than a mere pair of pants, pant, pant,pant !

I loved the story. It was both well written and fun. I also appreciate the nonchalant way you executed your conflict. Can't wait to see what you do next.

An awesome storyline that keeps a reader involved!!! I felt it was me living the story!!!

I consider one Favorite per thousand Views [see data at end of story] to be the Benchmark -- you do not see it very often.

This story is well over 2 1/2 (!) times that.

Another Benchmark is ten years submitting stories on Literotica -- few writers attain it. RejectReality is well over that also.

I do not have a Benchmark for percentage of stories with a red H. If I did, RejectReality would definitely qualify. Only one of his numerous stories does not have the red H -- and that one misses by only 0.03.

TRIPLE CONGRATULATIONS

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Paul in Oklahoma

Really love your stories!

Maybe being a really old guy is the problem, but I get lost going from one girl to the other. Other than that, this is every guys fantasy. First story of yours that I have read. Now to explore further. 4.8 which is close so you get 5 stars.

A well-written, sexy story. Nicely done.

That's what the cool kids call 'high-octane fucking'. Very hot.

A great fantasy, at the same time so believable. It was rough without being rude. It was persuasion without being forceful. It was fun without being deceitful. Loved how you set up the situation and described the entire thing without losing the grip over the story. Good job! - Mandy from India

Damn that was a fun story. Believable and mostly easy to follow. Which is hard to write with 2 women involved.

This kind of sex, deserves another romp!

Chapter 2 maybe? ;->

Absolutely fan-fucking-tastic! One of the best threesomes that I had with my wife and her girlfriend was when my wife was whispering words of encouragement in my ear just like Ginny did in your story. It brought back fond memories for me. 5/5

That was hot made me wish I was the one in that great sandwich

I just now read it through for the second time. I still enjoyed it very much, but the opening moments after Ava first arrived and the actual seduction began felt off and unbalanced.

Ginny started out convincing Cody to seduce Ava, but then Ginny is pushing the girl on girl idea with Ava pretty hard. I felt like she should have kept her focus on sharing Cody first and then once she facilitated that goal move forward towards the bisexual experience. You more or less have her pursuing both of these objectives simultaneously. Everything felt rushed at that point and out of balance.

Still one of my top 5 favorites though.

Incredible story, 5 bright stars indeed. That's the kind of 3 some I'd love to find myself in. Thank you for a fantastic story. More, more, more! Please......

And they say a woman's work is never done (seriously, tho, it isn't). Such a well written and well told story.

Insanely hot Perfect

Too hot to not be 5 stars.

Bill S.

Good premise.

Sex is MUCH too rushed. Too abrupt. Too automatic.

Needs to slow down.

Needed introduction to his cock in her pussy.

Ava could have watched Ginny goving him a handjob for a while. She could have been convinced to overcome her reticence and agreet/wanted to take over the handjob herself.

She could have gotten used to that, and then wanted/needed to bare her breasts and have them worshiped for a while. Then the same with her panties.

Step by step is what's needed. With dialog.

Three stars.

A really good read, full of action and well described , believable characters.

Excellent. Incredibly descriptive. Too many wimp out when the action gets complicated.

I feel I'm cheating you out of at least 2 stars. I can only give you 5, you deserve 7

Super hot. Great writing.

Excellent. I particularly liked the pacing and the variety. You have just the right amount of detail to keep the energy going. (I disagree with Anonymous of 1 year ago. The detail they describe would just drag it out and remove the erotic quality.) 5 stars.