All Comments on 'You Want It, Don't You?'

That was hot... really fucking hot... and well written!

brilliant story awesome writing reading this wass pure joy. so very erotic. and so hot and horny. out standing writing love it from start to finish

Your story was so amazing. Incredibly hot. The detail, the heat, the desire. Thank you for sharing that with us. I hope to read more of your writing.

wow Emma, incredibly sexy and hot. I could practically <i>see</i> the glistening moistness of the freshly-fucked cunt as she got on all fours for him. The only negative is it needs a bit more set-up. But well done overall!

wow what an incredibly erotic hot story, make it into a series in my opinion :)

This story was awesome, please continue it!

is both beautifully written, and searingly hot. Thank you.

This story is the best I've ever read in capturing the dynamic of sex between an older man and younger woman. The sex and the story are amazing!

This story was erotic to an extent I have to just say off the map. Maybe this story brought the perv out in me I don't know. But I can tell you I will be reading it again. Emma, the author is very ingenious with the scene and character descriptions that gives me a visual even if only in my minds eye, that makes feel like I am vividly watching this story unfold. Thanks Emma for the hot ride.

I wish you built up the characters! I have no idea who they are!

I am late to the party! I love a well written older man/young woman story. It's a bit of a fetish of mine, which is odd as I am female and in my 40's.

Can't wait to read more of your work.