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by tdallyn

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26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Weak, tired attempt at a story.

yowseryowseralmost 7 years ago
Sweet & Original

Clever. Wasn't sure where you were going with this but nicely done. Unexpected and very immediate.

phubbyphubbyalmost 10 years ago
Well done

Already fiddling around with my iPhone to see how best to position it next to the bed. Thanks for the inspiration!

starmanfivestarmanfivealmost 10 years ago
Perfection!

You have it right. You don't have to be a cheater to have great sex. And you don't have to write about extramarital sex in order to have a good story! ***** Thank you!

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