All Comments on 'Young Lovers Embrace'

Wow!

please continue the storyline

Following a slow start ... the author succeeded in arousing reflexes between my male thigh .... the girth of my boner and the prominence of its veins expanded exponentially as images of these young lovers embracing their inbred carnal desires for sexual intercourse in brewing over the years culminated in incestual orgasms which brought me to natures explosive eruption of my pleasure juices... a masturbatory climax induced through the erotic excitement of observing those young lovers coupling in mutual pleasures of the flesh. Thank you, dear author.

But you need to build up slower, build the characters, maybe some background... all in all good story. please continue..