All Comments on 'Young Lust Ch. 02'

Still a very hot story. I still hope that you will separate the point-of-view with asterisks or something. There are a few quotation marks issues and spelling mistakes, like the whole "there, their, they're" mess but, unlike the point-of-view mixes, the other mistakes don't cause as much confusion. Please keep the story going and try to add those asterisks or some other division between the character points-of-view.

Its hot and please continue, but once again can you seperate the POV or tell the story from one POV and possibly switch in the next chapter. Like next chapter be Clea only then the brother.

What better way to show the love and affection between step-siblings; and unlike the case of blood relatives, it's not even illegal. Just good fun.

A great series Bob. Keep it going. You're on a super hot roll.

i stopped when he went to her room and she had the big dildo a real guy would have told her i guess since you have that you don't need me then turn and go back to his room locking the door then ignore and avoid her til she leaves for college please keep it atleast somewhat realistic

You had a good idea. But lost interest quickly . It was too bloated with duplicate facts.