All Comments on 'You're My Better Half'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

OMG Brilliant as always!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Welcome back, Mugsy!

5 stars as always!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

oh my gosh, SO HOT. I'm a sucker for a well done bathtub scene. Five stars, baby girl.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Wonderful

As always, your work never disappoints. What a wonderful way to wrap up the bad day I was having.

Miris_GirlMiris_Girlabout 12 years ago
Such a lovely story!

I LOVE this story, I love the fact that the romance is built up at the beginning, it's so touching, and makes me think about my own boyfriend when I'm reading it, which makes the sex part so hot! Thank you for a lovely story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Oh my goodness! That was so sweet I almost cried! The romance made the sex scene so much better! Keep writing, baby girl! Eleven stars and two thumbs up! Btw, my name's Maggie:)

LadyFalconLadyFalconabout 12 years ago
Woot!

NOT a "Final Destination" story....thank goodness. I was reasonably sure it wouldn't be but the excerpt on your blog was just so sweet and I was worried. It was a very sweet home coming. Nice job, Mugsy.

secretitosecretitoalmost 12 years ago
Simply beautiful.

Honestly there's not much to add to that. It really was simply beautiful. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Beautiful as always!! The romance, the settings all of it .. And I´m so glad that you always post a new story. I love the story of Maggie & Christian. Is there gonna be another story about them? Maybe with him proposing to her? :))

sweeter_sensationssweeter_sensationsover 11 years ago
Love love Keith Urban and your stories do his lyrics justice :o)

Awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
I’ve lost mine

I read this heart warming story, the strength of your love so clear, like emphasising how I failed, I shed another tear. But from this I am better prepared, that should love ever come my way again, my love and perhaps I, will never feel this pain. To say to that better half how she was and is my everything is, is for now my only aim

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March 2021- Update: I'm not sure when or why, but the first chapter of my three-part story, "Bring on the Wonder" has disappeared. I think the powers that be removed it by accident when I requested a different story be removed. As of right now, I don't know where my original ...