All Comments on 'Yvette, the Amorous Robot'

by Boxlicker101

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Excellent, fun story

I enjoyed your story of the fuck-bot that does her "job" a little too well. My main Literotica story interests are Romance and Mature, but I enjoy an occasional well-done sci-fi/fantasy story. I'm older now (60) and have been married most of my life since my mid 20s, but I can sympathize and empathize with Stanley's need for s love/sex-bot. I was very much the intelligent nerd in my late teenage / young adult male days and can easily remember Stanley's frustrations and desires. I would welcome at least a short PART TWO to this story where Stanley is able to correct the disadvantages of Yvette with her becoming his own personal love/sex mate. I tend to "finish" stories for my own enjoyment like this to give them happy endings - so I'll probably do a part two for myself, since I doubt you want to continue this story since you accomplished the goal of the story of how a sex-bot could go wrong. Your story is well written and you made me care about the character Stanley. That's hard for any writer to do in a short story such as this. Thanks for the pleasurable reading experience and I'll check out some of your other stories - I may have already read some of the Mature / Romance ones.

PompousBuffoonPompousBuffoonalmost 15 years ago
Finely constructed story!

Excelent story! I throughly enjoyed your work. I'll be looing forward to YAM2 in future. Good character development, even Yvette as a character left me wondering what could have made her to be so much more than the creator originally intended. Fine work. Five stars.

hot zonehot zonealmost 15 years ago
Great story

I rarely find a story that's well written, erotic, and humorous to boot. Keep 'em cumming! How about a follow-up starring a male bot?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Thank u!!!!

There has not been a good robot story in this web in a loooong time

PrincessErinPrincessErinalmost 15 years ago
Loved It!

A great unique story. Great sex that was funny and hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I love Yvette!

Hope you write more unique stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Please Keep Writing!

I hope you can keep writing, I enjoyed this story more than most others, I can't name a bad area, nice work

ranger561ranger561almost 14 years ago

Great Story, I thoroughly enjoyed it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Not to Far off

Thid story seem to me that it not that far off from now im sure their somebody working on somethig likr this right now and kinda of mixing with the idea of robots taking over the earth just because it start making things up on it own.The thing that would make this story twice as good is a second chapter or even a small add on

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Steel is *way* too heavy.

He's use aluminum instead. Titanium for production models. And the word is "robotics", not "computers and stuff". Also, voice synthesis, not voice recording.

Anyway, gave it 4 stars for the concept, plot and grammar.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
loved the story!!!

loved the story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Do a number 2!

Do a number 2!!

It's great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Make a sequel!

Rated five stars. Liked this story, mark a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

5 stars! You had no spelling errors and I don't believe that you had any grammatical errors, and it wannabes written storey too! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Weird, felt kinda sorry for Yvette. I know, like I said - weird.

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