All Comments on 'Yvonne Pt. 01'

This story line has promise, I have met older women years later that I had a thing for, when I was younger. Some have acknowledge that they knew, others act if they don't know me.

It was a very interesting and well-written story. This was a great foundation for a continuation ....the character development was strong but there is a lot more to fill in. A good read!!

Yvonne the tease....

Good premise.

But sex it much too automatic when it happens. Moves ahead without details.

Three stars.