All Comments on 'Z at the Adult Theater'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
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More of Z's acventures please, she's one hot lady.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
sorta short

i taken dumps that lasted longer than that story.

geeeeezussssss

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Good start but...

I assume that English isn't your first language that or you don't know how to use spell check. Despite a well intended story, the language, spelling, and grammar were distracting.

Keep up the good work though. Looking forward to more!

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