All Comments on 'Zandra Ch. 03'

by MrPendragon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Brilliant

The first part of this chapter was very intense. Could have done with a bit more of a build up - she fell under his control pretty quick.

The story continues to be interesting, but ended a bit abruptly. I look forward to more chapters!

SweetGaspsSweetGaspsover 11 years ago
Splendid

Splendid indeed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Love it! I can't wait for Chapter 4.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please continue!

Great story so far! I hope you intend to continue.

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