by dr_mabeuse
This is what my fantasies are all about, but you put them into words fantastically. I came so many times; this piece was wonderful.
If only we could all experience a night such as this and live to tell the tale - well written!!!!!
This is what I always wanted, and the story left me...wet and dripping and excited. You wrote it so well, and your imagination is something to be admired. OMG I am still horny.
Wow. Just wow.
I've never seen a rape story done so well. I've read published erotica that's not as well written as this. I rooted for her every step of the way.
Dr Mab - you are the guru
That was one of the hottest stories I've read on this site. I must have cum half a dozen times during that story. Wow. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
This is one hot story. My one quibble is that you seems to have dumbed-down the whipping sequence. Whipping doesn't hurt after the first few strokes? Preposterous!
Still, you write really well; you must continue.
Hot but why oh why couldn't it end up being a predetermined thing and consensual
So hot, in real life I imagine this would actually be terrifying, painful and unquestionably wrong. In the context of fantasy my pussy was pouting and very very ready for penetration.
Absolutely great story - well written - clearly 5 stars !
May be the whipping is a bit odd as it got BETTER after a while ;o))
And the men queing nicely to wait their turn is not the norm...
It would be frightening in real life. More than a woman could take probably, but it was so exciting. So raw, so...dirty. I found myself wishing I was Zanny, and wishing it was real.