All Comments on 'Zara Betrayed Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
ZARA HAS TEETH..RAVI AND JACK PUT THEIR PENIS IN HER MOUTH WITHOUT PERMISSION

WHY DIDN'T SHE BITE THEM OFF?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

maybe because she knew she'd be punished for it perhaps?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very believable

This story sounds uncomfortably true and makes me wonder if it's a form of catharsis... Kudos to the author for the clear writing style.

It's the second time I've read it in 2 days - it just grabbed my attention and made me feel aroused and sorrowful at the same time.

I'd love to see those 3 a-holes get their comeuppance in a future chapter. Please write more soon, Zara!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Nice tale

Looking forward to a more! Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent

I love the realism of it, please write more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
More!

Thanks, any more?

Lisha94Lisha94over 9 years ago

The title of the story and the description grabbed my interest, some parts were uncomfortably relateable. There is help available out there you don't have to suffer in silence for the rest of your life

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