All Comments on 'Zoe Parker Ch. 04'

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betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Damn

You have to give this poor little girl a break. I said this after the last chapter. Please give this child a reason to live.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
5 ***** WOW

Ok so when I first started reading this story i was like OMG this is gonna be one of those woe is me stories,but you captured me everytime time I read it. I'm piss at her dad though how can you not believe her, but then again you abandoned her when she needed him the most. I kinda want Zoe to attempt suicide (No I'm not condoning suicide of any kind I've been there. I know what's its like to not feel love and be abandoned by your father) but I want to see more too this before she finds the guy or girl that brightens up her life. I dont know but I will keep reading this story.

-cumonmi

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