All Comments on 'Zorg – Fuck Your Way to Freedom!'

by cowboy109

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Loved this but...

you lost me when you exchanged Zorg's name for Toad after being with Rubin.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

you might want to edit from page 6 on, you kinda lost me with changing your Zorg to Toad in the storyline,

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