Hi, I wrote this story about a really good morning commute I had, and I would like to see what people think. I've had many many sexual adventures and I have so many stories in my head. Mainly I want to know if I should bother to write any more. If I suck I'd like to know that too. It says more than 7000 people have read my first little tale, but only 39 voted, so I guess it wasn't all that good.
I must say thanks to the many people who did take the time to send me the very nice comments. It tickles me that it excited so many people that much. For those folks I will have to write the sequel soon. Many Thanks, Jade
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