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Good chapter!

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by Boyd Percy  1 minute ago
Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Jay626

Sy, your love for your wife is so apparent! Maybe even more than in your previous stories. It shines through like the sun, so much that I can hear you saying "I love you, Amanda" in every sentence. The humor and love within this tale is wonderful!

Also, extra points for the title....

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When my wife is in the right, she typically loves it.

When she's in the wrong, she brings up something else where she *was* in the right as if that at all addresses what she was wrong about.

Seems like this woman. She *realized* she was screwing up before it became terminal to her...

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by Ambivalence  4 minutes ago
Loving Wives
NorthWI

I've never heard of molasses donuts but I'm tempted to find some real soon!

Great story.

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by Boyd Percy  6 minutes ago
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qhml1

AWESOME STORY . would really love to read more please

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by burrito54  8 minutes ago
Lesbian Sex
flyingbluejay

Sad story, but very good. I also had the big P-cancer. 4 months of radiation treatment, and it was gone. When I got the original diagnosis from my urologist, she told me either I had a chubby prostate or a problem. Then she and the radiologist fixed it. It's the designated driver...

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by LT56linebacker  10 minutes ago
Loving Wives
FrancisMacomber

A very powerful and realistic tale, very well written, I could feel the pain and the raw emotion, excellent ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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by Ocker53  13 minutes ago
Loving Wives
JimmyThePlunger

What? In 750 words you expect them to execute a big btb scheme? This was exactly the way it should have gone down. How the fuck else would you expect a man to respond to this? I would have done this but beaten the fucker to be hospitalized.

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by stillaonewomanm  13 minutes ago
Loving Wives
IWroteThis

Stories w/ unlikeable main characters are not my cup of tea. I couldn't find a redeemable feature of the main characters, as she seemed to be an awful human being. To be fair after reading about half of the first chapter, I skimmed this, just enough to see if she would do anything...

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by JoeBetterBNice  20 minutes ago
Loving Wives
tales_of_passion

Sure, Rachel experienced a horrific ending... but if your intent was to punish her, you just needed to leave her alive and alone.

No lover, no husband, no daughter, no life... and the knowledge that it was all her own fault.

Having her die in a master of months or a limited number...

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by Ambivalence  21 minutes ago
Loving Wives
oldpeter

Loved it nuf said

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by grumpa1945  28 minutes ago
Romance
qhml1

Just caught up with Becca on the last 3 episodes of her adventures in Cornwall. That was a bit of inspired pairing, with the crow after the blood letting and bonding with her and her lieutenant Nicole I was expecting conflict at every turn, but they came through in the end even demonstrated...

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by Devilboby  29 minutes ago
Erotic Couplings
Naughtybecca

Guessing the widower is going to make another appearance if there’s a next time

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by Cal59  36 minutes ago
Erotic Couplings
Boobytrap73

Thank you!! Great story!

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by tsgtcapt  37 minutes ago
Loving Wives
Slirpuff

What a ridiculous ending. Why do so many incest stories on Literotica end with siblings having babies? Makes no sense to me, is anti-erotic and just ends up ruining stories.

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by bluesbo  41 minutes ago
Incest/Taboo
rin_tin10

Since my stories are a little more tame that others I don't think any of mine sent your "student" to seek a Supreme Being... As long as is an adult night school. I am sure you do not expose our emails or real names (just our Literotica handles). Of course if you do I am sure there...

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by olddave51  41 minutes ago
Reviews & Essays
kenjisato

Wtf...

This part is out of order...

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by Monagamous_Now  about 1 hour ago
Incest/Taboo
William4All

Always a very good read.

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by linnear  about 1 hour ago
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Loving Wives
qhml1

This rivalry is fantastic — no need to apologize for brevity; length perfect. Can only imagine what comes next.

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by Migbird  about 1 hour ago
Lesbian Sex
AimEnigmaClick

This was a good start to a romance ... Shall we be allowed to see where it goes?

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by stewartb  about 1 hour ago
Erotic Couplings
lightandshadows

She was teary, saying how guilty she felt.

- Where? I don't see any guilt in what she told him. Certainly, she doesn't seem to care that he could just as easily have come home early to find her fucking some guy in their driveway.

He gets off on her cheating and humiliating him, good...

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by Ambivalence  about 1 hour ago
Loving Wives
LovingWifeLovingLife

Another great chapter, uk_writer_53.

I was expecting Danvilles to want to sleep with Jess before signing the contract, but this is a useful twist that brings out Jess’s exhibitionist trait and is another step on the journey to becoming a porn model and ultimate sex toy for Richard(?)....

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by Wiz1002  about 1 hour ago
Exhibitionist & Voyeur
uk_writer_53

This story was, first of all, very well written. I found it immensely erotic. The detailing was very comprehensive.

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by adegerome  about 1 hour ago
Sci-Fi & Fantasy
RayneDor

his promise vs her refusal to abstain from sex for love... who will win?

some good points brought up (what about long business trips, etc). two stubborn people, one of whom is both honest and dishonest with bad morals.

nice how it ended but it was a minefield to get there. well...

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by Oatmeal1969  about 1 hour ago
Loving Wives
Just Plain Bob

I lost track of this series, it's terrific

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by albertaboy  about 1 hour ago
Exhibitionist & Voyeur
Publius68

Good job, thanks for sharing your work.

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by blackknight314  about 1 hour ago
Romance
Bh76

kigyo,

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoy them.

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by bumpercars  about 1 hour ago
NonConsent/Reluctance
bumpercars

Fun story with fun visuals. Two in two days! Thanks Q.

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by SBC97281  about 2 hours ago
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Loving Wives
qhml1

Superb writing! Please continue back at the station and beyond.

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by abob1  about 2 hours ago
NonConsent/Reluctance
jimmiemccools

Wow, this chapter had my head spinning and then my cock throbbing! I thought after reading chapter #3 Alex had met his Mr. Right, someone more mature who'd be a good partner as well as a good lover. The beginning of this chapter has me rethinking that. Jeremy seems to come with a...

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by MarcLuciFer  about 2 hours ago
Gay Male
RoboTofu42

6.16.24. Good tale. The story is well laid out with some nice twists. The lightness of the tale heightened the enjoyment. I liked that they got together after being just an affair for some time.

Thanks for posting for all of us to enjoy. John

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by Btrying2  about 2 hours ago
Loving Wives
Just Plain Bob

The ending was a little over the top

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by RocketMan12  about 2 hours ago
Loving Wives
oldpeter

5 stars.

Nice fantasy. Just watched a nice documentary on Homo neanderthalis and your MC seems to have inherited a LOT of Neanderthal genes. Being short, wide, thick, and very strong. Oddly enough Neanderthals even on average have larger brains than us Homo sapiens. Now whether that...

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by justbobkc  about 2 hours ago
Loving Wives
Norseman123

Wow, 2 great stories published the same day. Thanks for sharing with us here on Lit and another 5 stars from me.

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by muddman74  about 2 hours ago
Romance
qhml1

I keep coming back to your stories. Thank you. I look forward to more.

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by Chuckles1966  about 2 hours ago
Loving Wives
Todd172
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