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I feel sorry for Shane.

Tess was really cold to Shane when they kissed she should realized it was the same passion as his wife. I just wish they would had some alone time together like his wife did with her but now years later she's still a stuck up bitch.

YOU ARE STARTING TO PISS ME OFF

YOUR ARE FUCKING HEADING FOR STUPIDVILLE. THIS IS STARTING TO TURN INTO A REAL CRAPPER.

Good story

This was a really good story. I could easily see it happening. I loved the part about her wondering if she was going to get pregnant.

great

I thought it was great. I loved the idea of her wanting it while she was asleep and I don't think it is considered rapes when she allowed him to do most of the things he did in her sleep. Just another great storie by this author.

I LIKED THIS CHAPTER BUT

IT GOT A LITTLE SMARMY AND UNREALISTIC. JUST THROW MONEY AT A PROBLEM AND EVERYTHING IS PEACHY. IT'S GOING FROM A VERY GOOD STORY TO A NOT AS GOOD STORY. I HOPE YOU MAKE NEXT CHAPTER BETTER.

Good Read*****

What could one not understand about your story. Thanks for sharing I enjoyed it!!

i've read worse stories but this is definitely with that group.

the shadows are where i belong... it is silent... comfortable.... home.

the shadows and i have but a single need... a desire to forget the light. your stories are most welcome in our arms.

Hike

Something happened that caught me aware that this trip was more than a simple hike through the woods.

Well done, again.

I think that if Richard is willing to take a chance on Cathy he should go for it. I mean he is the one that has to live with her not me. Would be like carrying a hand grenade around in your pocket with the pin already pulled out, Not a matter of if it will explode but when it will explode.

Clarification for a confused author

First off, if you're going to be upset about negative comments and low scores, put your story in the correct category and that won't be an issue. What you wrote was a cheating wife story, until it became fetish. That is where it belongs. As for tags, they show up at the end of the last page of the story. Readers don't see them up front. They do not serve as a warning, they are for search purposes.

Your writing is frankly amateurish. Errors abound, and your sentence and paragraph structure are poor. The descriptions are cliched. Loving wives may be a cesspool, but many of the site's best quality writing is here, and yours fails miserably in comparison. You may prefer to wade in the kiddie pool, before attempting the deep-end.

Of course it is your choice. Continue to peddle your sub-par wares in the wrong category, and your story will receive the attention it deserves. Argue with the readers in your comments, and your stupidity will be exposed. Chances are you crave the humiliation of being exposed as a rank amateur, untalented, and confused. Keep your pitiful fetishes in your puny brain, or pick the right category.

Sincerely, a helpful critic.

I FUCKED MY STEPBROTHER

I was 15 fucked my stepbrother he was 20 and the 5th time I fucked him my stepfather caught us and his son said its ok dad she likes it,so his dad said o yeah let me see and took his hard dick out and fucked me too while I was sucking his sons dick.The took turns fuckin me for a long long time.I said if I don't get a new bike and and sum new clothes im tell my real daddy on yall..They gave me want I wanted and more and didn't touch me for 3 months until my stepdad was drinking and wanted sum pussy,he said here/s 200 cum give daddy a good fuck .We started fucking and about 20 min he came and said ill give you more money if fuck me again,i did and this time he took 4ever to cum but it was worth it...I just love fucking men with super big dicks..

Fact is stranger than fiction?

I was confused when I read "that only 5% of the readers were female"?!? Really?
- Then I realized that this story was the male equivalent of "Mommy porn - 50 Shades of Grey". OMG, I'm reading ... "Daddy Porn". 😱 Tee hee
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