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He is really messing with your mind - bastard!!

At times the “near rape” was “rape” or as good as, which turned me off a bit. It took Jayne a long while to finally submit to her nephew and during that prolonged period I really wanted Jayne to tell the guy to “fuck off and leave me...

I loved the last line. Keep up the good work.

HOT STORY!!!!! Well done!

After re-reading, the cliché for Jackie is the grass is not always greener!

Staying with her husband, may have saved her the grief of losing her daughter, grand daughter and the two men she loved.

Nicely told... a story of flying too close to the sun and crashing.

She started by being in a group of couples constantly trying to one-up their husbands and wives in competitions to embarass the other partners, then took it too far, and got burned.

Maybe there's a chance for a reconciliation,...

both having muffins quite rare, and welcome, these days...

also fan of modest boobs with responsive engorged nips, and lean toned bodies....

I quite enjoyed that. I feel asleep writing my chimney and my fingers posted for me.

I quote enjo

Can't wait to hear about booth 12

Hi Anon,

Thanks for the comment.

And thank you VERY much for the 5.

To those confused they were a lesbian couple and the boss was trying to fuck the ex wife straight. The ex bro in law did in vitro with ex for the daughter because they were still close. Absolutely wonderful story for 750. I like a longer read and could see this being a longer read,...

Good lord I love these so much. I truly hope you'll grace us with a few more stories that continue to depict his spiral into a world of depravity.

Excellent! Excellent! Just the way you wrote it. So naive, vulnerable, descriptive. So “First Time.” Just the way I remember it over fifty years ago! Thank you!

HOT story!!! Go on soon ;)

I'm always intrigued how the wife in these types of relationship are not happy when their man steps out.

I imagine it comes down to the man/woman emotional dynamics.

Interestingly, while a woman can, initially, keep the sex separate from their married partner, if the affairs extends...

Sorry — I found the whole thing hopelessly confusing.

You do realize once they had the adultry meant nothing. In court

If Amber changed her mind and came back to find Sydney and Kyle in bed together then deciding to join in could make for a fun time. Dad comes home and finds the three of them together gets him excited and away they all go.

Too short....Idea doesn't work in 750 words....Nope. Needs at least 1500 words, 😃😄.

Two ⭐️s.

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Yeh, sorry I was confused with the end bit.

Irritating, as I re-read it and was still confused.

Alright, I’ve read this story and the other comments. Yes, I agree this is a depressing story of a man’s sexual frustration, loyalty and hunger for intimacy with the love of his married life. However, you have put in fine form the same problem I struggle with in my own marriage of...

That's entertainment ❗️

I am curious about the other characters.

Helen, Mark, and Jane, Kevin.

Maybe Satindesires can expand their experiences, stories. Explain the motivation for their respective actions.

Gave you five ⭐️s.

Enjoyed it. I'm

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Yeh, wife was obsessing, resolving then obsessing etc., then poof she's gone... WTF>

Yes! Exactly the emotional direction I was hoping this would go in. Lovely stuff. X

That’s it ,,, it just stopped after there first penetration 3⭐️

Excellent first story, even more impressive since English is not your native language. There are areas where you could improve and no doubt will improve as you continue to write. I encourage you to write more since you clearly have great potential.

If you choose to write another...

Perverse, erotic, highly entertaining. Loved it.

Oh wow, what a beautiful a story, I was hooked from start to finish. The way you built it slowly for us readers, was incredible. I do feel like the grande finale on the last page was abit 'whistle stop though', although your story was 27k words, I really didn't want it to end.

I...

It started good, but then became to much. After years he let her become a street whore? He lost all sympathy then.

this is just too cliche and reticules. 1 star and im out. good luck w/ your next story.

I sort of like this, but it didn’t hang together for me, maybe it is the style of writing, I liked the plot and characters.

"the first thing I've said tonight that was the complete and honest truth."

Now that's interesting...Some kind of dead bedroom problem? Is Mark actually cheating on her?

Can't wait for the big reveal next week.

Another stunning addition. Your ability to build up the anticipation is something I've always loved about your work. Sexy and masterfully written. You are gonna outshine us all

I don't get why some of the comments here are signed “anonymous”. Is anyone here actually writing under their own real name? Aren’t we all “anonymous”? Anyway, thank you everyone for all the very nice comments and feedback. There is a new sequel coming very soon. Within the next couple...

Great story!!! You're up to your normal (high) standards on this story, as well!

Would love to see more adventures like this!