Nightriders

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Nightriders

- The last day and night of prison

Prelude

Warming against cruel dank air
nightfall candles fire
sparks turning into embers
sharp smoke urging light
into darkness

Old dreams soothing the chill
bringing me closer
tighter to sleep entangled
in this hour of eternity

Eulogies

Ancient fears have come again
wearing smiles hidden behind fire eyes
arriving in the night to toy with me
hands choking crystal
scratching the star sparkle

Determined words barren
hurting my ears
and laughing

They return again
and again


Tempered Silence

Let rest this weary rider
let me sleep

Scars and deep wounds
chiding the eyes of memory
as the last day withers
beneath more barren trees
weary and without rest

Let me sleep

Sequel Two

She is the morning
a tear hidden in whispers
soothing the bleeding wounds
letting the mind regain
forgotten sanity

Two hands
not quite touching
watch my chains fall away

I am free

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
Do you

need me to tell you, these are great lines:

"scratching the star sparkle"

"chiding the eyes of memory"

Lose this:

"sparks turning into embers"

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Another.....

...great poem. This is one of those cases where I'd like to know the story behind - the seed - of this poem. I love the last verse.....

"She is the morning

a tear hidden in whispers

soothing the bleeding wounds

letting the mind regain

forgotten sanity

Two hands

not quite touching

watch my chains fall away

I am free "

...but the whole is so good.

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Wow

This is brilliant. Stark, moving and beautiful. One of my favorites, JD4G.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in todays reviews

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