- Erotic Poetry
- I... When he...
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Click hereI… (When he…)
I awake,
My breasts swell;
My nipples pucker.
I arch my back;
I spread my legs in anticipation,
When he touches me.
I shudder;
My muscles tense.
I close my eyes,
I can taste myself on his sweet tongue and lips;
The moisture builds in anticipation,
When he kisses me.
I soar;
I moan in pleasure,
I close my eyes no words can describe.
I match the pace of his frantic thrusts,
I climax and my mind blurs.
The anticipation of ecstasy finally sated,
When he fucks me.
- COMMENTS
Eluardabout 17 years agoThis poem is really well done — it manages to be genuinely erotic (i.e. it excites) and is poetic at the same time. It has the urgent shape and rhythm of sex. which so many forget to put into the poem. Very hot.
LeBrozabout 17 years agoWelcome to Lit with the nice piece of erotica sharing that special morning moment when he wakes you...
wildsweetoneabout 17 years agoi mentioned this poem in the new poem review thread in the poetry forum. please feel free to come along and join in. (the 50% temp rating is so that it does not alter other temp ratings). Welcome to Literotica! - wildsweetone
