Half Mast

Poem Info
143 words
5
2.6k
1
2
Share this Poem

Font Size

Default Font Size

Font Spacing

Default Font Spacing

Font Face

Default Font Face

Reading Theme

Default Theme (White)
You need to Log In or Sign Up to have your customization saved in your Literotica profile.
PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here
HRKW
HRKW
457 Followers

Our flag flew at half-mast
The day the Worlds came crashing down
The sky, its eagles grounded,
Lapsed to haunting, silent sound.

Where once there stood a skyline
Known all the world around
A funeral pyre of freedom
Rose from newly hallowed ground.

My stars and stripes and courage
Are stronger with my pain
My memory, in honor
of their lives,
-forever stained.

My heart beats at half-mast, today
My tears, like Towers, fall
My soul is tired, my spirit raw,
My ache wrapped up in calm.

But where strength is called to question,
I know that hardship gives it birth
And I hold this truth to be self evident:
That we will
forever stay
The Greatest Nation
on this earth.

- By Heather Killough-Walden
(written 9/13/01)
Dedicated to the American men and women
who lost their lives on September 11, 2001.

HRKW
HRKW
457 Followers
Please rate this poem
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
2 Comments
Sapphos SisterSapphos Sisterover 14 years ago
Beautifully expressed .....

.... tribute to those who died. My only reservation is with the last four lines (in essence, one line split over four). To me it's the only false note in the poem because it's clunky and spiritually seems at odds with the rest. Just my opinion.

HairRaisingWriterHairRaisingWriterover 14 years ago
WOW!

Heather, I have to tell you this is one of the most amazing poems I've ever read. I definitely cried reading it and it touched my heart in a way I can't even describe. Once again you awe me with your writing talent! Just wanted to tell you before you took it down!