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Click hereHer face is like an angel
Her body like a whore.
She is so cool,
She makes me fool.
Every time I see her walk
I try to catch her eyes and talk.
She’s little, but her tits are great
I feel she also wants to mate.
I know her hubby is away
I tried so hard to cross her way
I dunno what I have to say
To let her know I want us to play.
I hear her heels
I know she feels
Alone in the shadows of the street
And that is where I want us meet.
I know she is afraid of the dark
But in her eyes I see a spark
When she understands I am the one
Watching her steps, and doesn’t run.
“All I want is to fuck you silly”
All she can say is just “Oh, really?”
“You are a naughty man”, you say
To squeeze her luscious tits I pray.
“Your little body’s hot like hell
I know my cock would fit too well
Inside your burning little cunt
This is exactly what I hunt!”
“Don’t touch me, please!”
She’s such a tease…
I understand her words are right
But it’s my need I cannot fight.
My hands don’t listen to my brain
Her little protests are in vain.
Her little hands are shaking
Inside my pants they’re snaking.
On her knees she slowly falls
While she’s licking up my balls.
My dick’s head is so dark
She bites it like a hungry shark.
She looks so cool
Working with my tool
Her boobs are a magic spell
She’s doing her job well.
I stick it deep inside
And I begin the ride.
Her ass is sweet
She loves my meat
“You are a freak,
but such a dick
I never felt inside my pussy
And this is why I’m very juicy.”
Her cunt is gripping like a vice
How did it get to be so nice
“Please cum inside” I hear you say
I’m watching as your round forms sway.
and it's because you ended up forcing lines/words to fit a rhyme-scheme that managed to strangle any passion it intended to convey. the dirty, dark and horny is left as trite, manipulated and boring. sorry :(
perhaps try writing this again, keeping all the vivid imagery in mind and forgetting about trying to make it rhyme... it doesn't have to rhyme to be poetry :)