by MadQuill
i enjoyed this immensely and i would like to read more so please write again soon,x
I found this story to be a very good beginning to a very good and hopefully long adventure for Michael/Hallie.
Keep up the good work.
A very nice start to your journey. I look forward to reading more. I sometimes wish I had taken that step when I was younger.
A very nice story. You had me hooked from the beginning and enjoyed reading about Michael's transformation to Hallie. Will definitely be watching for next installment.
What a great first story -- I look forward to more encounters with the women that he encounters...please keep the men out of it.
...As I have met many girls who 'discovered' themselves this way, and the process IS much as you are describing. In fact, it can be so much more disturbing to the families as the girls hid any inkling of their 'issues' for years, buried under their professional work as a male and (usually) failed relationships. You've nailed so much of it that I really am at a loss to provide any helpful direction at the moment other than adding its a really lovely story and as usual your writing is very well done. Looking forward to more. Cheers! --- Josie
I agree with Josie. MadQuill, I have to catch up to chap 10. I've adored your work before, and it looks like I'm going to love this story. I smiled while reading the Shopping part. I was reminded of me at the CVS and Macy's many years ago. LOL. Thanks. I look forward to reading this evening.
I've reviewed these stories from over a year ago. I'm adding another couple of chapters.
Stay Tuned
MadQuill