SHIT! Wow,one of the best bro/sis stories I've read!
Im not into bro/sis but that was hot. So worth the hour it took me to read.
I couldn't stop reading. You played the story line like a violin. Great touch!! Can't wait to read the remaining Sara's.
This may be the best constructed story on this site!
youbadboy takes the time to detail each successive step of intimacy including the awkwardness and excitement of slowly, almost reluctantly yielding(and attaining.
Erotic literature is all about the vicarious experience of the reader. Few authors have shown such a firm an understanding of this crucial fact.
Well done, you bad boy! Would you rub my back? ;)
ty that was great
All your stories are great. You actually take the time to develop the characters and draw the reader in. Hope you keep writing
You REALLY please me, excite me, involve me, draw me into the story. Simply grand! Thank you so much!
This was really good. I have only recently found this site and yours is the first that I have taken time to actually leave a review on. I think your style of writing is simply wonderful.
One of the best stories I've read in a long while. What I like in stories is lots of what I call "fuck" language. Talking to each other about fucking, "my cunt" "your cunt" "your prick in my cunt". I loved her whispering in his ear about fucking his little girl. Oh fuck! I've just cum myself!
you should write an erotic novel u r very good at it u r realistic
Another poster said you should write an erotic novel and you might want to consider it. I really found your writing to be excellent.
The story was very well paced. I liked that Sarah's morning after doubt made the characters feel more real. Really, a great story!
i love this story, it just speaks to me and says "sexy".
Nuff' said. =D
The greatest thing about this is the realism. I fucking hate so many incest stories that involve a hot mom, hot brother, hot sister and some bullshit reason for people to fuck.
This was well paced, and patient, and it mattered.
Thanks for sharing.
Realism really makes a story for me and you nailed it here. Thank you for this wonderful story and i hope you continue making more
Awesome writing ... made me hard in no time ... great script line, this read like a true account of a comming of age sexual siblings on a Family Vacation. Thanks .. give us more !
After all these years, I still love the whole Sara series! XD I really hope you add more installations and update Sara's Pregnant.
What I like most about this story is the way little touches lead to more little touches, each less and less innocent, each a bit more erotic, and the way the girl responds to the guy's gentle assertiveness, until she finally takes the lead. He never forces things, but lets her accept his actions if she chooses. The fact that they are siblings is almost irrelevant - as it should be if they feel a sexual attraction.
I loved this story! One of the things I liked most was how you went from their being in bed at the start to their talking about it on the following days. I thought this was realistic, tentative and very sweet.
This story is as realistic as erotic fiction can be, in other words, I loved it. Not only that, but you upped the sexual tension between them with ever steamier fondling that started out sweet and affectionate.
I remember reading this series and the wedding story long ago. it caught my eye because i had a crush on a girl named Sara. I finally found it again. you have a way with words. thanks for the sexy memories
This is a story any person can read and feel the love between them the brother and sister. It also has some amazing embarrassing moments that hook the reader and make this very believeable. I hope there are more chapters to come.
As someone else said, "so natural...". The stories with the lines like "my HUGE cock sprayed gallons of cum into her" are so unrealistic, that`s porn in my opinion, while stories like yours fit the bill of erotica.
This is the best erotic story i've ever read. You should write more such stories. I've already read all 3 parts twice, please write more..
i love the fact that they had there embarrasing moments and how you worked up to the actual sex. Keep doin what your doin
That story brought back good memories of my brother when he took my cherry when I was 18 years old
He came inside me with his 8 inch cock. We had a small house with only 2 bedrooms. Mom ans Dad in one andwe had the other one.
After that we fucked every night barebach. I got pregnant and we voyed to keep our child..
I don't ever read such long stories. But your story kept me hard throughout all of the pages. Very good and erotic.
Such a cool groove.
Amazing story and pretty real with the reluctance in getting it started.The vacation has just started though, how do they keep it a secret now that thier emotions are on fire. I think they'll get caught. What will they do then!
very good .. the way sibling would behave if they are in to this.. sounds like real
Your writing is excellent. The slow smooth seduction makes for a much more interesting story. Incest and a cuckqueen wife are my too favorite topics.
just awesome...nicely written.
SUPERB story. Just the right amount of reticence before 'giving in'. A true understanding of the concept that the getting there is more than half the fun.
terrific story-great sex-love the characters thanks
I need more stories like this.
Thus far this story is realistic, as the awakening and progression of love, romance, wooing, and the eventual seduction of any and every male and female, man and woman throughout the history of humankind. The man and woman, this couple, fall in love!!!!! There IS only one difference!! This story is about the relationship of blood-relatives--still in love, romantically linking their lives, seducing and wooing, but with just the one difference of being connected by their DNA, genes and blood lineages--linkage--as brother and sister.
As with ALL love and romance, wooing, dating and seduction between a male and female, a man and woman, they love only each other--not the parents, not their other brothers and sisters, nor their friends, nor anyone else in their lives. As with most all incestual couples, they love, as lovers, each other ONLY!!
As with most reader's comments I offer my sincere, unadulterated accolades for an absolutely awesome story construction of the--finally--blooming and blossoming love for EACH other of Sara and her brother Jason. Their foreplay, in every aspect, is played out perfectly, not rushed, and best of all not overly done!! They are extremely respectful and trusting of each other, their love plays to the pleasuring, caring and totally, totally, adoration and fidelity of their sibling! Both siblings know they are destined to love no other; their lives have slowly ascended and built to this moment in time, in their lives!
This story is the precise heart-string tugger that I thrive to read and revere, consisting of romance, love, tenderness respect and consideration of their love partner, their incestual blood-relative sibling, and the connection as one union, the consummation of their heart's and body's, one entity of human bliss!!! My fervent hope and wish is this awesome series continues in the same vein as it has thus far!
What a Delicious Story!
Loved the SLOW, gentle, ever-building pace....a true LOVE story!! Hope Chapter two finds them closer and happier and even more daring!!
Absolutely Beautiful! I wish my real life were that good, half that good, with my wife! ;)
I love to fill my hot sister Cheryl's cunt full of my cum then lick my tasty hot sperm from her fuck hole.
You write very well and I enjoyed your story. I found the premise of your story to be very believable, but your editing needs to be better. Please keep writing.
I was hard the whole time I didn't want to cum till the end. loved it a lot. keep up the great work.
Keep up the good writing, plleeeassse!
very nicely written, good story keep it going
I think this was the best story I've ever read on here! Very well written, very little typos. Very erotic and sensual. Kept me hard the entire way.
So beautifully slow and subtle. Quality writing.
Wow! What a great ride they had. Story read very well; quickly, only a few characters to keep up with. Lots of short, believable dialogue. Can't wait to read the next installment. Curious as to why the dad didn't say guys with guys and girls with girls. Whatever motive the parents had works for me. 5 stars. Two thumbs up.
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