All Comments on 'Introductions to Three Stories'

Lust at first site is the most intriguing to me.

Actually, all three of these have good potential. You should finish each of them!

let me explain my vote

story 1: a good story, a tiny bit unbelieveable

story 2: not my style to read

story 3: an intriguing story with many possibilities

Love the idea, but don't be a democrat- follow your instinct! The first one appeals for simplicity and lust potential. Last one doesn't do it for me.

Not Scenario 3.

If, however, you can only bring us one story in its entirety, it would have to be Scenario 3. Thank you for a fascinating new way of telling a good story -- four stars.

Number One has the best potential. It's the right format. Number Two would be the best if it had a prose format and not a screenplay structure. Number Three is a familiar and a boring concept. My preference #1, or if necessary #2!

The other 2 give away to much too soon.

if you drop the screen format, too distracting.

Love both 1 and 2. Both are good. But number 2 is arousing me a bit more. Would like to see where they go to...

What is this? A seventh grade history test? What a waste of time.

I like 1 and 3 but didn't read the screen play as that format drives me nuts.

They are both have the potinal to be predicatable. It would be intresting to see if they were to go some ace unusual.

3 is the best

1 & 2 should expanded.

number 3.

I liked all three, although number 2 was difficult to read. I really liked all of them.

oith one and three

3

In order, I like 3, then 2, then 1. For me, 3 seems to have the most 'plot potential', and I also like historical settings.

I liked all three, though the format of number two was not my preferred way to read a story, you did say it is a screenplay. Having said that, my favorite is Winning a Slave. I also see much potential with this one. The time period may be difficult to work with, but it makes the introduction chapter very believable.

My question is, since you have the beginnings of three stories here, would you allow others to write following chapters to them? It appears that I'm late to reading this story teaser, so you may have already written the story the readers chose, but I'd like to see if anyone can do something with the remainder story ideas.

story 3