All Comments on 'Dope Slave'

by Dan_A_Donovan

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great setup, needs more sex description

Hey man, fantastic to see some really degrading stuff on here. Just wish the sex scenes were a little more drawn out. That first time he fucks her, if you skip a paragraph you miss it. It almost reads like he's a one-pump chump.

With more detail in the sex and maybe some description of how she feels (her humiliation, her horror, her shame), you'd have a hot story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
5 *

I love your story. It is very real life.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

What the ever-loving fuck is wrong with you? You need to be on a watch list somewhere.

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