All Comments on 'Presence'

Incredible! Wonderful......

An Amazing journey the words take you away, fantastic!

what a memory - so real!

Your poem intrigued and allured....taking me down, under the skin of the woman, quickening the pace of my reading, as "Jennifer" kindled up in her heat, line after line. The poem hit its stride with the stanza that begins "blouse unbuttoning," and from then on, your language held me in a moist grasp, clenching me vividly in places, as each phrase seemed like another pulse beat--or pant--towards the orgasm to come. You had me hearing the music of the woman scaling up the octaves of orgasm, as I kept scrolling downwards, with each phrase taking me deeper into joy of a woman coming to erotic bliss. Some of the lines, however, were too familiar or cliched (e.g. rolling thunder and erupting volcano). Thanks for sharing.

When all is said and done, it is the kisses I remember.

Loved your way with words here, Jenn. So soft and sensual. Great job!

esl

When I read this poem....I ultimately wanted to fuck the author.

Charged with profound eroticism. Damn, I bet you are good in bed.

Jim

to have it read to me . very intoxicating!

sparking... warm thoughts...and I enjoy that linking...bluerains