All Comments on 'Liza's in Control'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
A great story!

Jeez this was hot! I loved the kinkiness of it and the wonderful sense of her humiliation was delightful. The author has a lovely kinky imagination and I eagerly await more like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
brilliant

another in a great series - any chance of lining up the titles - difficult to find them as a sequence of downloaded files when they are in different categories

lesliejoneslesliejonesover 17 years ago
lovely treatment of subject

I found his treatment of the whole female feeling about our panties and peeing such a turn-on. Wonderful manner.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
What a Meanie!

Ms. Thomas whipping a tenant, controlling her, under the threat of eviction. Strange disturbing acts of violence yet very erotic in places where reference to panties is mentioned.

Weird emotions run wild.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Liked It!!!!!

Just get to the peeing and eating part sooner

spkfantasyspkfantasyalmost 12 years ago
Emotions running wild

The descriptions of her emotions are well done, especially for the power of that feeling to hold. This is the very heart of this story and it deserves a compliment.

Believability takes sometimes the backseat, but that is okay, given the former turmoil of her emotions experienced during that spanking.

The story plot is certainly a nice idea, which would merit comparable stories to be written again - I hope that the author will just do that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
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dis stori waz viry gud 10/10 wud riid agin

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