All Comments on 'Den of Iniquity Ch. 04'

how am i supposed to go to work now?

Sir Nathan you've done it again. Just when I was wondering if we were ever going to see the next chapter of this story you came through. You write so well as has been said before, this would make a great short story and really should be published. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Good point about the nature of subs in the real world most are in postions of power and authority...be it even small ones..Thank you for taking time and effort to write this piece..

Tripwire

++curtseys deeply++

Nathan Sir, every chapter is better than the last. i don't think there was any part in this one that didn't delight. and i do so long to pay another visit to the club. ++blushes++ better yet, have Them visit and feel inspired...

Bravo, dear Sir.

pleasure

i gave it a 5 Sir, because it made me really horney and i couldn't stop sticking my fingers in myself and i don't usually vote

ok i'm bad but people who give it a one are just stupid

please write more!

Absolutely wonderful Nathan Sir am now eagerly anticipating Chapter 5...

...Soolee

This left me lusting for more.....hurry up and write chapter 5....i need my fix!!!

wonderfully written Sir nathan, we all agree and eagerly await more work from you.

*tips her hat*

Chapters 3 and 4 even better that the last two, how do you do it, fantastic, thanks again.

I must admit that I am a woman who loves raunch but aside from that, this turned me on a great deal. thank you.

I'm sorry, that was awesome!

all i have to say is can i have another chapter Sir grins

wow love it

A very nice piece of true D/Es erotica! I must admit to going back and forth as to which direction I was hoping Rodger would go. Half of me wanted him to become a sub, and part of me thought he would, considering the women at his office! But I'm so thrilled at the way you decided to play him as a Dom! In making him a novice, we get to see his transformation from an easy going nice guy...into a COMMANDING dom...at least I hope that's where your taking us in this fantastic tale! Now excuse me ... there are more chapters I must get too! and Thank you for sharing your beautiful talent!

I really didn't think I was going to care for this series after seeing the description, but there is a realism to this. It helps me believe that fantasy can be reality and that there is nothing wrong with it. It rationalizes this nature that is buried in some people. I love it love it love it! I would say its hardly raunchy... sophisticated and civilized intense erotica.

Talk about being worked up for a story! Always pleasing, SN

-a

This chapter had my heart racing. Loved it!! Thank You!

That did it for me.

I am an admirer of your literary skills but need take personal offense at what is really but a minor part of your plot: I have forty years military service, mostly ‘Special Ops.’, seven years federal police work; I’ve worked security and know ‘Secret Service’ guys who worked for the Clintons and Reagans. We are not ‘Oafs’ who would ‘Ogle the girls’ or disrespect the lifestyle. Most of us are professionals and take great pride in the subtle and discreet practice of our chosen trade.

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