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A Great One Pager - read it!
Gritty, tender, fast moving! In my opinion one of the best one pagers I have read on Lit.
A well crafted story that any writer would have been proud to have created. Of course it is not quite perfect - but then perfection is an ideal we strive for, near perfection is what we hope to achieve.
Much ado
That left so much unsaid, but told a large story. It was sad and truly erotic. Thanks.
Gauche
Give em a taste of Kiwi
Yep - trust Kiwis to get erotica right.
Great writing. keep it up (pun intended)
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