All Comments on 'Naturally New Zealand: Little Ado'

by wildsweetone

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jon.hayworthjon.hayworthabout 20 years ago
A Great One Pager - read it!

Gritty, tender, fast moving! In my opinion one of the best one pagers I have read on Lit.

A well crafted story that any writer would have been proud to have created. Of course it is not quite perfect - but then perfection is an ideal we strive for, near perfection is what we hope to achieve.

gauchecriticgauchecriticabout 20 years ago
Much ado

That left so much unsaid, but told a large story. It was sad and truly erotic. Thanks.

Gauche

JohnnyMaxJohnnyMaxalmost 12 years ago
Give em a taste of Kiwi

Yep - trust Kiwis to get erotica right.

Great writing. keep it up (pun intended)

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