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Naturally New Zealand: Little Ado

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by jon.hayworth03/08/04

A Great One Pager - read it!

Gritty, tender, fast moving! In my opinion one of the best one pagers I have read on Lit.
A well crafted story that any writer would have been proud to have created. Of course it is not quite perfect - but then perfection is an ideal we strive for, near perfection is what we hope to achieve.

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by gauchecritic03/11/04

Much ado

That left so much unsaid, but told a large story. It was sad and truly erotic. Thanks.

Gauche

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by JohnnyMax07/12/12

Give em a taste of Kiwi

Yep - trust Kiwis to get erotica right.
Great writing. keep it up (pun intended)

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