by carrieoct15
Don't worry about the grammer or first or third person mistakes, this is a well thought out story and makes good reading.
Good luck with any future writing, don't give up.!
Bob
Good story, loved every minute of it. Write more like this very hot and sexy.No wonder Jake shot cum in his pants.
Mike NZ
That's very hot & nasty phone call, I loved it, please write sum more like this, also would like to the back story, how they ended up like this. Rated HOT & NASTY 5 stars