having read both endings... i can't say i liked either... Carlton is strong business man who we find has a love for Leah.... he doesn't know how to handle those feelings which we can understand. Strong willed men generally don't. IF they cannot control they discard. Which is what Carlton did, he threw Leah away to Alexis.....
the understanding of Ming and Raymonds relationship finally showed him what and who was missing from his life. Seeing Leah in a work envionment, sure of herself, not needing him was a good thing. He should have then if he loved her tried to make ammends. Slowly bring her feelings of love to the surface so together they could become a couple.. not owner/slave. The big mistake you made in one of the endings is having Carlton wimp out and buy a slave only to turn around and make a safe haven and turn in slave owners... OHHHHH please...
I guess i am just a romantic at heart but neither story ending was quite up to 'par' for me. But that is my opinion and you know what they say about those!! I totally enjoy the writings of Passion St John and hope to see future works of hers. Jane
We have read both endings and prefer Choice 1. Carlton is so stupid that he had to ask Raymond why Ming loved him so much. Didn't he know that he could not keep a pet like Leah? Even after he played the good guy and rescued Leah, not once did he mention that Leah was now a Free person and still he refered to her as Rabbit. She does have a name. So now Carlton is going to help the slave trade break up, but he bought another slave anyway. His spots will never change.
Laura & Lisa, bi sisters @ CU
i loved both endings very much..but the first ending seemed less cheesy..it was so sad but he got what he deserved..he shouldnt have sold her off..no Master would do that unless they were terribly cruel
if I had to choose from these two, I would pick the first. But Maybe a thrid choice would be in order? *hint hint, nudge, nudge*
The ending for choice 1 was more what I would have expected, it also leaves a better opening for further chapters.
i love all your stories but i'm afraid i have to agree with everyone else. it's not nearly as good as i had thought it would be. not sure i like either ending. i think you could have done better but of course that's just my own opinion
i really reallyy loved this story, and i loved carlton... wish i had my own version of him... but ya, i didnt like the ending either, i didnt read the first, cuz i knew i liked carlton, but it s just still not complete yet... i think she shouldve ran into his arms and he hugs her and they love eachother and get married and live happily ever after.. well maybe not married, but like permanently devoted, like a marriage without a wedding, and she could still be his pet, but not treated badly, cuz its still always nice when the guy has control... but what do i know? im still a virgin anyways.. just a girl actually, but thats what i thought.. ur stories made me stay up untill.. *checks clock* wow, nearly 5 am on a school night.... couldnt stop reading them o darn.. it wont let me log in.. i guess i have to sign up for this stuff.. i guess that means im gonna appear anonymous, but just so u know, my name is katrina, and my email is email@example.com, or firstname.lastname@example.org, doubt ill get any replys though
liked this version best i did like Carlton and Leah was hoping she would fall in love with him and live happily every after
I have to admit that I couldn't even bare to read the first choice. Those first few chapters were so amazing, but when Carlton became confused and cruel it was painful to read. I mostly just skimmed the chapters with Alexis. I really liked Carlton, and maybe I'm just too empathetic for my own good, but I think he really did just make a dreadful mistake in the heat of the moment. I kept my fingers crossed, wishing that he would realize his mistake and run after Leah and swoop her back into his arms. The last few chapters just made me sad.
But you are an amazing writer, and I really think you know what your doing. I'm going to read all the rest of what you wrote. Hopefully your other stories won't be quite as heartbreaking.
It was such a good story, but this ending disappoints me almost as much as the alternate. I wanted Rabbit to reunite with Carlton having come to the realization she loved him and wanted to be his slave, to have the same relationship Ming and Raymond have. That's the happy ending. I still rated it a good story though, it was well written and I enjoyed it.
So far I'm voting for choice 1, this chapter didn't ring as true.
Choice one actually made me cry. This one is a bit to determinedly idealistic for a series that otherwise tended toward the serious and dark.
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