by eyeglitter
I like this idea. It's great fun. For what it is worth, I'd like to see it done in an even more farcical manner.
Can't wait for further installments. Many thanks for a hot read.
A little longer would have been nice but this is fine. Like the way you gave a base to the story. Do keep going...Thanx
A very nice beginning, well done. Hopefully you will continue the series. I have seen many well begun, but never continue. Good writing style, with a touch of humor..don't lose that!
I loved it and am glad that you have part two, but it seemed to just stop, when you more than likely could have contiuned on with it. i can't wait to read chapter 2
I see major potential here- read part 2, hope there's a part 3 (hmmm, maybe something about the grooming class?)
I want to transfer to Fairfax Academy!! I m Betty18. I am looking forward to wearing their uniform, & taking a shower in the girls shower room.