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by Eleanora Day
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Maria2394almost 20 years agoooohhh
this is really romantic and sexy at the same time. I hope you post often and plenty , nice new voice :)
My Erotic Tailalmost 20 years agoInspirational~
wonderful poem, enjoyed it very much, Thank you, (~_*)
WickedEvealmost 20 years agoI like it, Eleanora
though I'm not quite sure about "to the rose to you." Maybe it's the to-to in that one line.
twelveoonealmost 20 years agoI loved it
Except for this:
its fruit open
What fruit? the plum? I would drop "its fruit"
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