All Comments on 'Amante V'

never heard morning quite described this way, nicely avoids the cliche of gray. Very nicely done!

"The sky is turning to milk,

gray pearlesence; the birds

are speaking.

The night breathes its dying sibilance."

is better than the one before.

I wish I could describe the pictures I see in these

just gorgeous, languid, timeless lovers.

These really are paintings, works of art.

and the words......

Seductive

Some of your best writing ever

Thank you

....beautiful....plain and simple.

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