All Comments on 'Ravaged in Broad Daylight! At 18!'

Wow... What a great job this writer did of making MY dick stand up. It seems as though the author is relating to us an actual incident, rather than something we WISH would happen to us.

i loved both of your stories and the thought of being seduced by a stranger is exciting. however, being taken and fucked severasl times has myt cock rock hard. what made the story great is you know when he sees the picture, he cand hardly wait to have thoise wonderful cocks up his ass again. i think the next time i visit my relatively secure adult theatre, ill spread my legs, expose my man pussy and pretend to be asleep. maybe ill get lucky or..maybe ill be fucked.

I enjoyed the outdoors aspect of this story. The older man and younger man encounter made it really good. Keep up the good work.

Your story really happened to me. But, I was only 12 and my molester changed my life. I went back looking for him day after day. Being sucked, licked, and rimmed drove me crazy. I then found a barber that was amazing. But, like you say, that's another story. I loved yours and wish I had someone local to share the contact with daily. Great job keep writting.

Hey, you got my attention....I've read all five and god I hope you write another one. It seems this kid likes this older guy a lot. The man appears to have some kind of shall we say, spell on the boy. and he knows it too. i liked that.It just makes me wonder why the man hasn't asked the kid to move in yet. dreamin, i guess...

Wow loved it, made me cum so much

brought back memories of when me and my cousin mark used to fuck just like that. his asshole was so sweet, and tight. i used to fuck him for hours. and he did me also. thanks.

I loved that story!

my man clit is as hard as a rock. my man cunt is vibrating with lust. i wish that cock was pounding me, fucking me. pouring hot cum in me. oh.

Fantastic! xx WT

This story was amazing! I'm a straight 22yowho can think of nothing but gay sex now!!! This story turned me on to how erotic gay sex can be. reg_roch@yahoo.com

i just turned 18 too

i want someone to do this to me for real

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Good man to man love-making. One critique: spend a little more time on the various sensations of having a hot, hard, large purple headed cock slide up your slick hot anus. loved the story tho, got me hard and stroking.

Rudy

Wish it was me on that beach.......

Im a girl but i just cant help getting excited over guys fucking each other. I guess it makes a change from straight guys and lesbians though! My biggest fantasy would be to have a guy fucking me while another guy fucked him. Amazing!

Reminds me of my first time with an older guy. Thanks for the submission.

if anyone in the michigan area wants to meet for a gay fuck session my email is spanish.dude.88@hotmail.com. I'm 18 just like the dude in this story!

If you're in NJ, I'm looking for gay sex shangrilasfan@excite.com

That was amazing! Not only was it well written it totally blew me away had me going from the very beginning!! VERY NICE!!!

I've never been with a guy yet, but I don't know if I could. It would have to be like in your story were I was forced to do it...I know I want to but too scared. I live in UT and I am Mormon, but I jack off all the time thinking of sucking a cock. There is this older guy at the gym I go to that is so buffed and I've watched him when I'm showering and go home and jack off thinking of sucking that fat cock. I've cumed in my hand and licked it and thought of it being some guys. Is anyone in UT that wants to show me how to suck cock. e-mail me at likesoldermen18@yahoo.com

Loved this story so much....you got mail, Jason:)

anybody else like to hook-up in the UK-Midlands, get in touch

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:)

Hot hot hot! Reading it made my man clittly stand up. I wanted to be that boy in the park or at least the one watching. By the end of the story, my man pussy was running wet. I rubbed that hot spot on my clitty and had the best cumming I can remember.

This is one of the hottest stories I've ever read on literotica! I just started seeing a bi boy, and next time we are together I am gonna share this story with him so we can cum together! My pussy's all wet! Thank you!

That was a well-written piece! *hooked already*

I'm fuckin ready to blow after that! I've always loved being watched by strangers in public but I've never managed to get fucked out in the open. So, so hot

Very well writen! Had me hot, hard, and wet with pre-cum through out the story. Being a mature Bi top, I wanted to be the older man with the lotion. After reading your story I had to go drive my cock in a tight hole...Loved it and I'm reading all your stories. If any smooth ass bottoms in north Jersey want to play contact me at: PRknight69@gmail.com send ass pictures and mention this site.

Fine story, or should I say a fantasy of mine. I would surely love to be taken in such a manner. I would luv to have a young man like this allow me the pleasure of pleasuring him. The only thing I would add is pictures for me to pleasure myself again later with. You lucky one...

that was such a good story!!

Would have loved to be molested by that man.

gave me a trip down memory lane when a older guy seduced me years ago in a surban park it was great gave me areal hard on

I would give anything to have that happen to me!!

I'd love to experience exactly what Mark did - this story made me hard!

Yeah, an older man nailed me also, he was a gentleman and knew what he was doing. He wasn't that big, big enough,but had the moves down pat; He had me within a few minutesshallowing his cock and when I thought it couldn't get any better, he tore me a new ass and for 3 months after , he daily, or when I could "used" me It was a sad day when he told me he had found another, I ,truely do and did miss him, have try it once since, not even close, someone suggested I try a black dude, they said they are good ass fuckers, guess we will see.

I don't know what to say! WOW!! Just wow.. You described everything hot, nasty, sexy :)

that was really hot ;)

Oh man, this is a total fantasy!! What a great story, I can't wait to read your others. I have a feeling that my rock hard cock will be in for a workout.

Paralyzed from fear, he looked at the man, expecting him to be shocked and disgusted

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your character spent a lot of time being 'paralyzed' and 'shocked' and 'speechless' in this story----and i think you used hair, fuzzy, hairy and other derivatives of meaning 'hair' like 2 dozen times.....let me guesss- you like hairy guys?

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He even wanted this older man to touch his dick! But surely he wouldn't

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why would he think the guy that rubbed his balls and was currently finger-fucking him/ wouldn't want to touch his dick____this character is either incredibly stupid or maybe retarded or developmentally disabled.......if someone just started rubbing your balls- you'd think it was a mistake? if someone put his finger in your asshole you'd think it must have slipped in- surely he didn't mean it? so you see- retarded

plus you said he had no clothes that fit him- but he found a pair of sweats and a t-shirt that fit him. and people don't grow out of all their clothes overnight- he would have bought larger sized clothes as he grew throughout the summer----too unrealistic to be satisfying

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This older man could rub LOTION on me anytime i found it exciting geting layed in public.him and his friend could do me anytime.

Review of

Ravaged in Broad Daylight! At 18!

We know that Mark’s father takes the same size jeans as Mark and this first made me feel that this could be a good incest story but I’m just being naughty! This isn’t at all the direction the author is taking us.

To start, we get a very satisfying description of our main character that would satisfy anyone who likes to fantasize about an 18 year old who has a substantial amount of hair growth. And so, to go on, he feels that when he cut the legs off the jeans he might have cut off a bit too much. Anyway, he wants to catch some rays and knows a secluded spot which might allow him some privacy, and the freedom to wear the cut-offs.

Well, we can pretty well guess by the title that after this point our 18 year old Mark is going to have his desires attended to. Of course, we want to see how well the author is going to make this a real turn-on for the reader. I’m going to get sort of sidetracked at this point because of what I read from one of the critical reports of this story. This critic wants to believe that the author strayed seriously away from reality. The author tries to capture the thoughts going through Mark’s mind as the ravaging occurs. The thoughts might not be logical but I can accept illogical thoughts for several reasons. Mark is still a virgin and is totally inexperienced in being approached in this way. But still, Mark has a desire so he doesn’t push away when someone approaches. One thing he senses is that the man is not a threat and is quite the opposite as in displaying charm. One good way to get your hands on a body is to suggest that you rub on the sunscreen. It’s a sure gentle enough approach to gain the trust of someone or help the person get more comfortable to being touched.

It doesn’t take long for the stranger to get bolder and the action gets on quickly but the rubbing is the basic acceptable idea. Marks questioning during the whole happening simply displays that he is offering excuses to himself. “Did he mean to?” Mark asks. I can forgive Mark easily for these seemingly absurd questions. When I was reading the story I did ask what we have here. Is Mark really that naive or is he making excuses? Of course the man meant to make particular touches but Mark doesn’t want to take the blame. This is a first for him and he is being taken totally out of control by all of the good feeling coming from this. He isn’t doing it. It’s being done to him. All he is really asking is if this is really happening.

So finally, Mark does realize that he is being artfully molested. And, like wow! This is a great story of a description of a first experience – a fantasy that exists in lot of the minds of gay boys. ***

~by~ Gallant Beingness ©

I did something very similar with a pair of jean shorts when I was younger, only I did it on purpose. I attracted lots of hard lustful men, and had some great romps in the woods. Now I am in my fifties and would love to be teased by a young cock like this. Great story to bring up fond memories.

Fantasy come true for me. Wish I was Mark.

LOVED the story!! Very hot!! I had a cousin named Mark who I fucked regularly, he also had an incredible ass!!

Horny story I wish I could have participated !

would love to fuck a young stud in the park like that.

The voyeur watching the action was a nice touch!

I'd love a mans big cock fucking me while i sat on his lap. i want to make out and get ass fucked like this 747 999 5998 text me to arrange fucking my ass.

Excellent story. Would really enjoy having that happen to me

almost same incident happened to me

I started crossdressing after school in my sisters clothes and did it for a friend one day and ended up him fucking me i loved it and started going out at night to parks and dressing up girly and going to toilets and giving my holes to men to use it was great sucking a variety of cocks and being fucked by mostly horny older men who clearly wernt getting what they wanted at home sucked off and getting tight anal sex to empty their cum load into. I guess word got around as some night i had several cocks using me and i gave them all what they needed and definately got what i wanted always going home with a puddle of cum in my panties where it seeped out of my very well fuckèd sissy fuckhole