All Comments on 'Watermelon'

You show the readers with details and wonderful images.

thanks

My comments on your poem are on the new poems thread in the poetry forum. I did not use the thermometer for rating.

this is wonderful.

those small details make the whole poem

Excellent work

Thank you

...is wonderful slice-of-life stuff, and not just watermelon slice. Liked this very much.

What kind of circumstance/no time to sort you out/your saliva is cool/and sticky on my chin/like watermelon/seeds in