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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/05/04

I thought this was a very good beginning and hope

you write more soon! I am glad you did not choose to have him take her virginity while she was inconscious, and can't wait to see how you continue this tale. It has a pit of potential and I hope you don't leave us waiting too long!

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by Chele2001_200012/31/04

Awesome!

I'm really not into these kinds of stories, but this one blew my mind. I would read a chapter a night and it was more and more incredible each time. Very hot story. I loved it.

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by Anonymous07/16/05

loved it....

The first chapter of this story is scorchingly hot. I can't wait to read more!

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by CharlesJ07/31/06

Ooh! Marvelous

What a treasure! Just found this little gem of a wonderful story. Wonderful plot and likeable and believable characters. A fantastic read.

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by Anonymous01/28/09

Love it!!!!

This is just sooooo great ... great work..write more :)

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by Anonymous02/02/09

well done

You've made me want to read the next installment.

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by mariasmd05/09/10

ummm

so far this sounds interesting. im curious to see what will happen. but here the thing that bothers me; feminine armor?? really what is that?? granted she is a women, but really?? not cool.

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by puncture10/12/11

Captured

This is the start of what looks to be a good series.Thanks

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by Andromeda712/31/11

I agree.

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