All Comments on 'I Need To Talk To You'

Betraying her husband for such a worthy cause! Will she continue to live with the lie between them? Will she feel so noble if he decides he needs a divorce, since he can't trust her any more? But wait! She did it all to help her poor, depressed friend, your honor.

Very few people realize that adolesent crushes do grow up... in to lust. But you added the most important thing; a magnetic chemistry. Who cares if she leaves her husband? If she were happy with him in the first place Garett wouldn't mean so much. I love this story and think you're an amazing author for not letting her be drowning in guilt when she gets home, it just wouldn't have been logical.

Now that she has "cut the icing" she needs to revisit Garrett over and over and over again without a thought to her ovulating periods and have a lack of birth control. She can continue to fuck her husband but it is Garret's baby she wants....And her husband need not know.

It's nice to read a story that doesn't rush straight in to the big sex scene! The character development and the telling of the backstory between the two characters was very well written and appreciated on my behalf. The only complaint I really have would be that a quickie would have been a nice little element added to the end of the story before she finally runs off to return to her husband and family. I expect we'll be seeing more of Sierra and Garret, and of you as the author!

or should I say slut?

There was not nearly enough buildup to the sex. You should have taken another two chapters to even get to it. You had an interesting premise, but instead of fully exploring the characters, you decided to give them the "One story fits all" treatment. If you had gone the opposite route, the story would have been more believable, and exciting. Except you didn't, maybe you should consider revising this story and reposting it in full form it was meant to be in.

Cheating spouses should go in loving wives or erotic couplings. But it was a good story nontheless

The writing's not bad but adultery in the Romance section? Not so much. Not unless the husband is the villain and here, he seems nice. A genre has rules, that's why it's a genre and not just modern fiction.