All Comments on 'Downtown'

It maynot have the wording must people like, I found

it easy to digest and understand. This subject is

about the pain of a broken heart and doesn't need to be

fancy, just the truth. I like how you wrote this. The images are in black and white and seem real.

I've been to that quiet bar to cry...

It made me feel sad, so it is very good.

Now I need a happy one. That really stirs up a lot of emotion. Thanks

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