by archibael
not at all gd not lieing here this is by far the worst story i have ever read. where was the mind control?? didnt belong in this catagory at all. i'd try to write more details and better stories
i think the first comment is a little harsh but i agree that this would have been better under first time or maybe explain some kind of mind control that was making her act the way she was. Something in the dice?
Just because this story didn't have 26 paragraphs of someone swinging a watch in front of someone doesn't mean it isn't an MC story! There is implicit MC here and the story is hot
Well done!
Well, it was a pretty good imitation of me, but you're at your best when you're you!
Michelle
Excellent interpretation of a song! Cute details like her thoughts and garments. Great job!
Oh and Good Girls do that particularly when they want to have fun 😉
Besides all of the Good Girl comments are a form of MC just ask anyone in a D/s relationship.