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Reborn Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/06/04

Has potential

Left me hanging, need a strong second chapter to keep me following, namely as to what has actually happened to him.

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by Anonymous12/06/04

Intriguing , Good

Intriguing premise, well-written, erotic. More soon, please.

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by Anonymous12/12/04

Hope Story is Continued

Good story and I hope author continues it. Like the previous comment says, it is an intriguing premise. I am Very interested in seeing what happens next, and eventually, the explanation for how he is Reborn.

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