by Shadowsandflames
You managed to share this man's feelings about losing his father without going into a lot of detail. Must be the poet in you. Though sad I liked the story.
I know the numb feeling well myself. My father died two months ago, and I've been mostly numb ever since. Not that I adored him. He was a hard taskmaster, grumpy most of the time, and not easy to be around. Still, I wish he'd even once told me that I had done well at any task I ever did, but that simply wasn't in him I guess.
You've captured my attention with poise and skill. This writing seems very sincere, and it makes one think about all the times they've been through those thoughts and emotions themself. Very nice job.