by aysa69
A couple of distractions that an editor could have resolved. Don't hesitate to get one. Tnx
A solid story between sister and brother with alittle bit of caring, sharing, lust and love all bundle up in the bedroom on the bed.
Chapter 2 is very well done. I can't wait to read the next chapter. At this point I don't care about the Alexia character having been cheated on by her former boyfriend because her love-lust for her brother, and vice versa, could've been revealed without that plot device. However, I admit, I haven't read beyond Chapter 2, so for all I know the plot device involving Alexia's ex will become part of the action. OK, I'll be patient. For now, I'm enjoying your writing -- both your craft and the incestuous eroticism between Christian and Alexia. And, by the way, that's quite bodacious of you to name an incestuous character "Christian"! Naughty girl, you.