All Comments on 'Chance of a Lifetime Ch. 01'

Very well-crafted work, carries the reader along on the emotion without laboring about it. Excellent start, hope to see more soon.

But you do have trouble with that glove, don't you? Firstly, his hands are gloved, then they are not when he traces her jaw, and then you realise that the gloves have mysteriously disappeared.

I thought it was very well done. I like how you mention it wasn't really in her character to be that rough but that she was possesed to have that cock. Sort of how I feel occasionaly lol.

Jules

Great start. I impatiently looked for the next chapter before noticing that this is a brand new story. Your first posting - well, let's just hope it isn't the only submission you make. I'll be looking for more of your stories.