by shelly28f
The build-up was exquisit. The 'play' was delicious. The slow slide to oral sex was lovely. The descriptions of the lovemaking was enhanced, for me, by the last-minute removal of their panties. As a guy that loves to do [or fantasize] this exact sceneario..........yummy!!!!!
excellent attention to detail; very psychologically real and erotic. please write more!
Wow, what a fantastic read, it has an amazing build up and is by far one of the best stories I have read in this section.
Best lesbian story I've ever read! So convincing and realistic, and in a setting seldom done well!
loved it but want to know what happpend at the payback
Your writing is simply fantastic, I enjoyed every word of it. Definitely enchanting and very sexy.
Possibly the best lesbian story on this site. Its incredable.
Very erotic. i appreciated the play with the two girls. But please follow up on the payback. I want some more of this stuff!
got the biggest hard on eva what a story my girlfriend and her friend lick each others pussy's out while i wank ova them they are doing it now while i was reading this story i gonna go and have a wank ova their tits
So hot! this story is so convincing....it has made me come countless times!
omfg! this was an interesting story that i just had to keep reading to see what happened! i started to like dry hump my pillow! ahh! amazing(:
i really liked this
i think this #1 along with another story i read(;
Oh my god I loved this story, and I am wet as heck. I hope to see more from you
I had my first orgasm reading that. Damn I know now I'm bi. That was amazing!
ahh! my pussy is sooo wet. my friend was here reading this with me and now she's rubbing my pussy and I'm about to suck her pussy so hard!
I've read this story so many times now and every single time I cum when I read it. My Pussy is tingling with desire and I just want to be there you know?! Fucking good orgasm!!! Great story loooooved it!!!
you got me all wet and slick. i decided to wear a corset myself and read this while strocking my pussy. more please
Wow!! That was the best story I have read in a long time. I love the idea, dialogue, details and just simply your style of writing. Never stop writing continue your love of vocabulary, plots and settings, you will go far. I look forward to seeing more of your work posted on this site
Totally aroused by the passion and sensuality of this story! Lovely!
This was an amazing story, please make more these to the same quality and standard, on top of having a good plot, I couldn’t spot a single grammar issue unlike some other stories which completely ruin the plot, in general a great story and I personally would like to see more of these!